Dargquon Ql'deleodna

Put effort in things other than YWS (school, drawing, band, etc.).

Grabbing the torch with a slight thank you Sirloaz walked down the right tunnel a bit crouching to the ground to get a look at the tracks. Lightly running his ...

Cool, i wish i could read russian, or german. I just finished Speed of Darkness, very good book, ive read it a lot. READ IT!!! if you like sci-fi. Im ...

Dan, please chill. I have an idea. We find some castle supposudly where the evil is coming from, Its a castle on the mountains that over looks sedgely and we ...

Yea, sab's Right, and also I figured we could possibly find a network of tunnels and such. Find some trouble and do a little more running/fighting before we go traveling ...

Cyrus scoffed "pansy fightin's what it is" as he walked over to Henry and sirloaz sitting against the wall; "gimme a good axe or hammer and ill smear them across ...

First of all, this is a poem? Its more of a story. Second of all what's with your punctuation? The period marks are just thrown around and you're missing some ...

I could go through and edit mistakes and such.

"Here" sirloaz said offering Henry a bit of smoked meat he had saved. "thanks" he replied ripping into the meat ravenously. "so, how is it?" "its quite tasteless, but it ...

Right some one preferably not too injured. So Valin, sirloaz, and tan'quin. Or you could go sword against axe with cyrus.

We'll dono and I have a plan about the cave. First off we need to take a rest and do some actual role playing. Stop fighting for a bit while ...

Henry had apparently fallen unconscious the herbs somewhat had slowed the bleeding, and it was time for rest and time to pick up where Carmenia had left off. He just ...

Blue is suggestions, green is the points of interest/problem. I'll finish later, didn't have too much time. When the clock struck half-past midnight, The faintest glow of blood-red grew Out ...

Thanks, for the critiques. I haven't had a chance to spend some quality time and edit the whole thing just yet. I haven't even touched the beginning, but now that ...

I decided to continue it. The story jumps around a bit. "A few words on Mark's behalf William?" said the priest, snapping William back into the dull gray reality. The ...